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Tengoku no Monogatari  Ch. 1 pg. 3 by ONI-production Tengoku no Monogatari  Ch. 1 pg. 3 by ONI-production

WARNING: VERY CRAPPY SHADING!SORRY......and MAINLY SHONEN AI/YAOI



Page three
thank you for stopping by. this is the third page. i know i take super long to make a page and im sorry to those who are waiting to read it. im so slow when it comes to drawin pages, coz i sit around forever trying to make the paneling look nice, hence im no good at paneling. and also the shading is crap, man! i dont know how to shadddeeee!!! gah!!! and the drawin is getting stranger and stranger..... goddammit! nox looks like shit! wtf?!?!?! too lazy to change it now (ノTTuTT)ノ

please dont compare my characters to others.... it annoys me.

thank you for any comment or/and fave : ) i hope that you will like it.

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:iconqueenytheawsum:
QueenyTheAWSUM Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
why.. is this... so cute.... WHYY???? :iconcannotevenplz:
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
hahaha thank you os much :D
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TasteMyStyle Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
u draw so good :icononionxdplz: ! please put more :3
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
thank you so much. ill try -w-
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TasteMyStyle Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:happybounce: !!
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HattersPet Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
:3 im gonna hav to read this from the start and your shading isnt crappy :D
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
thank you for taking your time to read it : )
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:iconhatterspet:
HattersPet Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
nah its all good im a manga junkie if its good i'll read it i have no intrest in factual boring books :3
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norskCRAZEH Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Don't be down on yourself so much! :hug: You're shading is amazing, Nox is still my absolute favorite and looks SEXY, :squee: and also I JUST LOVE IT ALL THE TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :happybounce:
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
thank you so much for your supportive words :icontearplz:
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:iconnijixsmallgrey:
NijixSmallGrey Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Read it from the beginning and I loove it! Im gunna watch and keep up with it :3
Your shading isnt crappy at ALL XD
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
waaaaaaaaah???? an awesome artist like YOU
watching ME?!?!:icont-tplz::iconexcitedblushplz: unbelievable~~~ im too
happy for words! thank you so much :iconbrohugplz:
and im so happy that you like it so far -w- though
i am very slow with this coz im trying to make some
money with my other account. sorry if i keep you
waiting :iconlazycryplz:
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:iconnijixsmallgrey:
NijixSmallGrey Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
o_0 Artist like me??
Im nowhere near your level hun XD
Im glad your happy though! :3
Take your time honestly!! XD
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
YESSSHHH~~~ you are so good at proportion~~
and your drawins are so cool! and you can do dynamic
poses :iconwantplz:
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:iconnijixsmallgrey:
NijixSmallGrey Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm still working on my proportion and stuff XD
Figure drawing is a god-send if you want good anatomy ;A;
A lady came into our school who works with big animation companies like pixar and dreamworks and gave us a few days of figure drawings XD
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
youre so lucky!! m stuck with business : (
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:iconnijixsmallgrey:
NijixSmallGrey Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awweee :( A good free way to do it is to go to www.posemaniacs.com its a figure drawing website XD
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ONI-production Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
OMGGGGGGGGGGGG :iconwthplz::iconfabulousplz: thats the best site EVERRR!!!!
thank you so much :iconiloveyouplz: this is gonna help so much :icontearplz:
thank you so much for sharing :icont-tplz::iconinloveplz::iconborhugplz:
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EnenraEnn Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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He finally appears...dear lord I love him so much :iconpervplz:
What are you talking about?! This page not only that has wonderful shading it has everything it should have! It looks wonderful and it makes me want moreeeee
You did a really great job!
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ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
haha thank you so much hun. im happy to hear
that you are excited about nox's appearance xD
lol thank you so much for the kind words :icont-tplz:

ive got a couple more pages planned but havent
start on it. i hope that they will be up to your
expectation :icontearplz:
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Vitamin-Emo Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow i love ur style :heart:
love those lips! and eyes! and face, love the face! X3
i don't think the shading's crap
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
thank you so much for the comment :icont-tplz:
i still have to work on the shading... it doesnt
look too smooth yet. i guess coz i rush the shading
when i do the pages : ( but thank you
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Vitamin-Emo Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D ur welcome
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arashi-chi Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
What are you saying ;A; Nox looks so cool >v<
And uhh everytime I read you aking people not to compare your OCs I get more freaked out.. who would they compare them with? .-. Yours are probably the most non-mainstream OCs I've seen around on dA > <
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ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
people like to compare callias. he always gets compared.
and it really depresses me :icont-tplz: so sad....

thank you so much. i happy that you like him here. he looks
a little strange to me... i cant really put my finger on it.
maybe its his.... shading?? :iconimseriousplz:
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:iconarashi-chi:
arashi-chi Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
I don't know, it looks all perfect to me u.u

..Callias? o.o oh well, whatever, you just don't mind them > <
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
yeah the red hair one. well. the trapish one in this b/w case
haha.

awww your words are too kind it brightens me up :icontearplz:
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Lee-Kate Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What are you talking about? This page looks like some cool manga that I want to read again and again <3
And lol Nox as chibi is so cute <3 This page is awasome ^^ And shadding is great you don't need to worry
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ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
awww you are so kind thank you so much but ive been
changing the shading for like.... a few times -_-;
reuploading again and again -A-; i guess im in a rush
to get my ideas down before i forget....

im so happy that you like it :iconlazycryplz::icont-tplz::iconcryforeverplz:
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Lee-Kate Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well draw first everything what you got and then shade when you are bored XD I'm really impresed by the quality of your pages :3 You go girl :3
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ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
thing is... i see the picture in my head for a second
then they are gone. only the dialogs are left :iconimseriousplz::iconifailplz:
so when i plan i only randomly not down what i remember
in my head like [Nox, closeup eyes: dialog] lol absolutely
no drawing what so ever :iconimdeadplz:, coz when i do pages i draw the actual
thing right away coz its much faster. i rarely skecth. only
when im really in trouble with drawin haha i work in a really
stranggggggeee way :iconwthplz:
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:iconlee-kate:
Lee-Kate Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You work in special way :)
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
haha you are very extremely supportive of my weirdness XD
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:iconlee-kate:
Lee-Kate Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are not weird :) And I love all your work and that's why I'm supportive :3 and ofc I think you as my friend
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
you are my friend too~~~~ and thank you so much im
super flattered by your lovely compliments >//////////<
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ritsuke123 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
wow nice are ya using manga studio?
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
nope. i dont know how to use that program.
and it lags like crazy on my computer. so i
only use sai and photoshop
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:iconritsuke123:
ritsuke123 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Me:oh....no wonder it was different from my views!
Raziel:wah your amazing... ur can draw chibi callias so easily... unlike my stupid danna(ritsuke123) here can't even draw because it doesn't suit me
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:iconohanabi:
Ohanabi Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i like your style , and god that guy is hot XD
keep it up :>
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
thank you very much, n im glad that you like him : )
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:iconohanabi:
Ohanabi Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome :>
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xxfurthermorexx Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome job! just one thing u made a little mistake with the small writing in the last pannel :D! <3
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
oh whoopsie! haha i hate typos. ill change it eventually
thank you for telling me.
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xxfurthermorexx Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sure xD!!!!! ur style is uber cute cant wait for mores :D
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
ill be working on it till my uni semester starts
again. so i hope that it will be up to expectation : )
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xxfurthermorexx Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sure it will! from what i see anyway hahha xD itll be amazing if you are really passionate about it and enjoy it ! : D
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JeremiahDA Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
The shading is FINE!

I can tell this is going to be a cute story!
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:icononi-production:
ONI-production Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
thank you :icont-tplz: i hope that it will be sometimes serious too -w-
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:iconhiroto22:
hiroto22 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
very well done!!! I would love a heart-shaped-eye-patch y'know.
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DandyBlood Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't see any issues with the shading. D:
But you are your worst critique, which is okay because it makes you better. c:
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